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The Stars





Alone with the stars, amidst web-like
Gatherings of tiny dots of perfect light.
The stars, perennial in  their walk;
Their bright descent through every night.

In them you can see the trappings of
Our generations-  the automobiles,
And cantilever bridges; sentinels of modern life,
Reflected in the eternal mirrored star-fields.

But you also know, when you look up,
That they’ve gazed upon the upturned face
Of Napoleon; and with many ‘Ave’s’
Did they greet Caesar.  Ethereal time and space.

And now you greet the stars.
You partake in the viewing of their stride,
Beyond your reach the greatest vault-
Those diamonds of a greater race enshrined.

The only thing impressed upon my mind,
Beyond the perfect beauty, the greatness of it all,
Is that before the giant of eternity,
The greatest man must crawl.
©2006-2009 *Loganforever
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Just something i wipped up to a random musical playlist, actually i hand picked beautiful songs. Like wonderwall by oasis, and claude debussey.

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:iconinsanityinheaven:
This is really great. Concerning the music, sounds nice, care to show the playlist? Would be interested in it very much, have most of Cl. De. myself, but not on pc.
:iconcrazed-mongolian:
I really like the fact that this poem doesn't seem to force rhymes upon the reader. Makes it that much more natural sounding, and yet the rhymes still are present and tie it all together.
...I apologize if this doesn't make much sense. haha

Anywho. I like this poem. (=

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We are entirely smooth.

Against the assault of laughter nothing can stand.
-Mark Twain
:iconloganforever:
It was one of his piano impressions. Also Good Enough by Evanescence.. Can't remember the rest. Thanks!

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“To write the poem of the human conscience, if only of one man, even the most insignificant of man, would be to swallow up all epics in a superior and definitive epic.”
Victor Hugo
:iconloganforever:
Makes perfect sense. Thanks.

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“To write the poem of the human conscience, if only of one man, even the most insignificant of man, would be to swallow up all epics in a superior and definitive epic.”
Victor Hugo
:iconcrazed-mongolian:
That's good. (=

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We are entirely smooth.

Against the assault of laughter nothing can stand.
-Mark Twain
:iconortheius:
its beautiful and meghan couldn't have said it better. I'm slightly shockec at how awesomely moving that was. *two thumbs up*

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:iconloganforever:
Thank you very much. It was moving?

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“To write the poem of the human conscience, if only of one man, even the most insignificant of man, would be to swallow up all epics in a superior and definitive epic.”
Victor Hugo
:iconortheius:
very. It was like a revalation kinda. Something I've thought for a long time but wasn't in words yet, then you put it in words that are just... exact. Ok, i sound like a raving lunatic, I only hope you kinda know what I mean. haha

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Kinda, ; )

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“To write the poem of the human conscience, if only of one man, even the most insignificant of man, would be to swallow up all epics in a superior and definitive epic.”
Victor Hugo

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